extensive big-picture editing

Developmental editing

Please note: Due to the intensive nature of developmental editing, my availability is extremely limited, and I am selective about the projects I take on. If I am fully booked for these, or if you’d prefer a similar but less intense service, you may like to consider a manuscript assessment, which covers many of the same elements.

Developmental editing provides you with:

  • Actionable feedback in every chapter of your manuscript to help you sharpen key story elements and improve your writing craft.
  • Detailed guidance on all the big-picture elements of your book – so you know what’s working and which areas need more attention.
  • Key knowledge on your target market and how your book fits in – with detailed editing solutions to meet those reader expectations.
  • Comprehensive strategies and advice in an extensive editorial report, crafted to help you develop your work in the next draft.
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what you get

Service includes…

You’ll receive an extensive editorial report (10–20 pages) focusing on the key areas of your manuscript: plot, structure, characters, writing craft, setting/world-building, and market positioning. Alongside this, I’ll provide detailed comments in every chapter, suggesting areas for improvement as well as pointing out aspects that are working well. Where appropriate, light teaching examples are included. For example, if you’re struggling with point of view, I may edit a short passage to demonstrate how to fix the issue and teach you more about craft.

At the end of the edit, I’ll send you a manuscript revision guide and a customised resource sheet to help you with any particular craft areas you might be struggling with.

A one-hour consultation is included within two months of the edit so we can chat through any questions or ideas you have. This will either be be an audio-only call or a live text chat.

I’ll also look at a revision plan for your next draft (maximum 5,000 words) within two months of the edit.

What’s the difference between developmental editing and a manuscript assessment?

I know this can be confusing – so I’ve written an entire blog post to explain!

The key difference between developmental editing and a manuscript assessment is the intensity. They both focus on the big picture, but a developmental edit is extremely hands-on, including not only a detailed editorial report but also chapter-by-chapter-feedback and teaching examples. It’s a far more transformative, deep service.

A manuscript assessment covers the same big-picture areas in the form of a comprehensive editorial report. It’s a detailed, thorough evaluation, but leaves out the comments and teaching examples within the manuscript itself. It’s ideal for authors who want a thorough, professional overview without the level of intensity involved in a developmental edit. Perfect for authors who worry about being overwhelmed by too much feedback!

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What other writers are saying

Worth every penny

I came to Rachel having never published a book before. I decided to take a chance on her and give her my baby, After World. Having hired her twice, I can say you’ll never find a more caring, compassionate professional. She is methodical and precise. She pointed out blemishes in story arcs and character interactions, and never shied away from pointing out things that didn’t work. This may seem standard in this industry; the difference is, she always provided concise ideas on how to improve these elements. Whenever Rachel and I set up a timeline, she was never late. Authors should feel at ease that their time is taken seriously, and this editor takes her job just as seriously.

After working with her, honestly… you just feel good. She’s genuinely interested in the work. She includes notes about what she likes and wants to know more about. These little tidbits of positivity really help when you’re up for long hours remaking your world.

Rachel was a wonderful addition to my team and in helping bring my book to life. I would recommend her, especially to new authors who need a helpful hand in cleaning up their work. She was worth every penny. I would hire her again without a doubt.
Ean S. mills
Fantasy author
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Insightful and essential

I had quite the pleasant experience throughout. The information provided to me was always clear and concise. I never had to wait long for an answer to my questions, either. The feedback on my manuscript was in-depth with clear examples and presented in a structured manner. I was particularly impressed with the dedication shown with regards to the in-manuscript comments. The phone call to discuss any lingering questions proved to be insightful and essential. Would highly recommend and consider using these services again in the future.
James LyALL
Fantasy author

Book your developmental edit

I take on a very limited number of developmental edits each year, and I’m highly selective. If you’re looking to refine your manuscript, contact me to secure your spot. If you’d prefer a similar but less intense service, you may like to consider a manuscript assessment.