extensive big-picture editing
Developmental editing
Please note: Due to the intensive nature of developmental editing, my availability is extremely limited, and I am selective about the projects I take on. If I am fully booked for these, or if you’d prefer a similar but less intense service, you may like to consider a manuscript assessment, which covers many of the same elements.
Developmental editing provides you with:

what you get
Service includes…
You’ll receive an extensive editorial report (10–20 pages) focusing on the key areas of your manuscript: plot, structure, characters, writing craft, setting/world-building, and market positioning. Alongside this, I’ll provide detailed comments in every chapter, suggesting areas for improvement as well as pointing out aspects that are working well. Where appropriate, light teaching examples are included. For example, if you’re struggling with point of view, I may edit a short passage to demonstrate how to fix the issue and teach you more about craft.
At the end of the edit, I’ll send you a manuscript revision guide and a customised resource sheet to help you with any particular craft areas you might be struggling with.
A one-hour consultation is included within two months of the edit so we can chat through any questions or ideas you have. This will either be be an audio-only call or a live text chat.
I’ll also look at a revision plan for your next draft (maximum 5,000 words) within two months of the edit.
What’s the difference between developmental editing and a manuscript assessment?
I know this can be confusing – so I’ve written an entire blog post to explain!
The key difference between developmental editing and a manuscript assessment is the intensity. They both focus on the big picture, but a developmental edit is extremely hands-on, including not only a detailed editorial report but also chapter-by-chapter-feedback and teaching examples. It’s a far more transformative, deep service.
A manuscript assessment covers the same big-picture areas in the form of a comprehensive editorial report. It’s a detailed, thorough evaluation, but leaves out the comments and teaching examples within the manuscript itself. It’s ideal for authors who want a thorough, professional overview without the level of intensity involved in a developmental edit. Perfect for authors who worry about being overwhelmed by too much feedback!
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Book your developmental edit
I take on a very limited number of developmental edits each year, and I’m highly selective. If you’re looking to refine your manuscript, contact me to secure your spot. If you’d prefer a similar but less intense service, you may like to consider a manuscript assessment.